Thursday, December 9, 2010

Wednesday, December 8, 2010

Assessment webs




Date


22.11.10
6/12/10


I meet my deadlines


4
3


I set challenges and mini comps if things get boring

3
3


I organise and keep track of my equipment.


4
4


I need nobody to remind me to behave or get back to work.

4
4


I keep my eye on the prize


4
4


I always have work to carry on with.

4
4


Total


23
22


Self Reflection / Goals

I need to set more mini challenges or goals and complete everything on time at the end of the day instead of leaving it to the last minute.I must meet all my deadlines now to complete my T4 goal. I still need to set more

























Quiddage writing

9/12/10
I have done well in Quiddage. Buying soup is quite good (with bread). Getting close to having 40 minutes retirement without business money. Our business the Poolstarz hasn't been the best but still has earned me enough to get 40 minutes. My jobs have included bank manager,accountant, technician, time keeper and QZ times editor.
I earn the most snidges for payslips.

Vis lang Assessment 4




















What did I do Well?
B,B and B colours.
What is my next learning step?
To make more colours included.
What did I learn?
I learnt what lowing meant.


Y6 highlights

Aww man, we’re Year Sixes and we have to leave school. I've experienced some great camps like Palm Grove and Camp David. Our camps are so awesome!! With low ropes climbing over obstacles three metres above the ground and don’t forget orienteering tramping through the bushes. Sports too; yes my hockey team should have won last year. We scored way more goals than our rivals and they still managed to score a sudden death goal in the final. With Quiddage we can make and sell food or run games. Some of the teachers I've had have been great (yes you, Tee Cee). I never want to leave Riverdale, all my friends and teachers.

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

My Dialogue Writing

"AAHHH do I have to jump?" asked Jed, horrified.
"If you want to be brave," Samuel replied.
"What's down there again?"
"A pool of ladybugs!"
"Can I jump yet ? I've been on one toe for half an hour now," Jed said tiredly.
"You could have jumped half an hour ago," laughed Samuel.
"Could have told me that,"
"So you jumping yet?"
"Let’s get it over and done with,"
"Here I go," Jed yells

Athletics Writing

Clap! The hurdle race starts! I start in third. On the first hurdle I jump too high. I slow down too much. At the second hurdle I jump well. but not well enough. On the third hurdle I jump perfectly and gain speed.

I start to catch up to graceon and Hadley. I can see the finish line more easily. With about two metres to go I catch up to graceon. Yeah! I beat him by about 5 centimetres!

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Speech Video & Assesment

video

Speeches

Written and Oral Language

We are learning to:

* Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately

* Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically

Speech Topic:

Cheating

Self Assessment from video

Speech in front of class

Success Criteria:

Speech Writing

My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced

yes

yes

The point I was making was easy to understand

yes

yes

My speech contained research

yes

yes

My speech had voice and was interesting

half

no

My speech was in my words

yes

yes

My big idea comes through strongly

yes

yes

Presentation

I enunciated my words clearly

half

half

Terminal consonants

no

Ts and ds in the middles of words

no

Swallowed my goobies first

yes

Seperated my words

yes

My voice was loud enough

yes

yes

I learnt my speech off by heart

half

half

I used expression in my voice

half

no

I used enough volume to be heard by all

yes

yes

I used eye-contact

yes

yes

My speech was not too fast, not too slow

yes

half

My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes

yes

no

My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words

yes

yes

Total:

13

10 1/2

Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14

Self Assessment after Video

Self Assessment after Speech


Sunday, October 17, 2010

Monday, October 11, 2010

Term 3 P.I Comments and Matrix

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Reads the words on the PowerPoint or Glog
 Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

I think I'm a practitioner.
I've chosen this because I have had some good work. I didn't have enough time to have some audience interaction though. this would have improved my results.

HomeFun Percentage

85% is my result. this is my worst by quite a way. I don't think this will happen again. I need to check the SDL board each day to see if there is anything i need to do.

My Term 3 Goal Assesment

What did I do Well?
I completed my goal.
What is my next learning step?
to make my goal more colourful.
What did I learn?
to make it more B,B and B

Monday, September 13, 2010

My Best Writing


What Did I Do Well?
I Have Created A Rhyming Poem Without Being rude the people of Christchurch.
What did I learn?
I learnt about the Christchurch Earthquake
What is my next learning step?
To create A poem Context

Sunday, September 12, 2010

Best Vis Lang


What Did I Do Well?
I Made The Colours B,B and B.
What Did I Learn?
To Colour my Pictures B,B and B.
Whats My Next Learning Step?
To Make Less Pale Colours .

Thursday, September 9, 2010

Spelling Test

I did mine well though i could have done better.
1 thong i could have done better was the harder words like enthusiastic.

Sunday, September 5, 2010

Free Writing Cristchurch Earthquake

Earthquake, Earthquake,
Buildings Destroyed, Buildings Destroyed,
Injury, Injury,
No Death, No Death,
Flooding, Flooding,
Waste Water, Waste Water,
Millions Of Dollars, Millions Of Dollars,
All Gone, All gone,
Years Of Work, Years Of Work,
All Gone, All Gone,
Time To Fix, Time to fix,
All The Way, All The Way.
Memory's Will Always Stay, Always Stay.
Christchurch.
Ruined Demolished, Ruined Demolished.

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Free writing

Hi I'm Alan and I wanna win the gumboot from lc12 they've had to long. Way to long. Hand ball here we go. Well beat them like they beat us in freak ball 30_0. That's what happens. 4 quarters 10 minutes each.all four IGT teams. This Will be good. But we will have to give the gumboot a proper home. Not a card board Box.5 star hotel. Always open ready for the gumboot to return.

Tuesday, August 31, 2010

Math Tests Term 3



i think i did well. I still could have got 100 percent on all of them

Sunday, August 29, 2010

Monday, August 23, 2010

Fitness test results




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I did well in most of my tests but in a few I could have done better

Tuesday, August 10, 2010

Self assesment for Self assessments

I Believe that some of my self assessments were quite silly and didn't do much of anything to help me. More percentage of mine were better and helped me.

Tuesday, July 27, 2010

My goal


1.not muck around and try not to talk

2.do not think about other topics and set myself a task

3.move away from people who disturb me

P.I term 2

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Reads the words on the PowerPoint or Glog
Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

Wednesday, July 21, 2010

Homefun percentage

My home fun percentage was 97 percent.
It was a good result and i only got one no.

Monday, June 28, 2010

Maths Explorers 2010 Work

video
W.A.L.T use multiplication and division to solve a problem.

S.R: I think I did it well and in good time. This is a good way to learn because you have to explain how you did it. I learnt about the strategy's you can use for this sort of problem.

Tuesday, June 22, 2010

My Descriptive writing on autumn

Autumn is cold like a fridge. You have to wrap up to keep warm. leaves fall everywhere. Its like roads are overflowing with leaves. If you clean them all up tomorrow there going to be back. The air is fresh though cleaning the sky's. You see a whirl of red, green, orange, yellow and brown. it looks like a tornado but it's only a tree and its leaves. you look up and the trees are sticks and branches. CRUNCH! The leaves are like 1 cm thick bridge crumbling under 1000kg.

S.A

What did I do well?
I Did the similes well.
What did I learn?
How to make a good description.
What is my next learning step?
To not describe the same things differently.

Monday, June 21, 2010

Best Visual language piece

I chose this because I had liked my pictures and border. This has got my highest assessment points. I have got more white but I put more effort into it.

Thursday, June 3, 2010

My cross country assessment


what did do well?
I ran my hardest.
What did I learn?
To push myself really hard.
What is my next learning step?
To set a more reasonable goal.

Monday, May 17, 2010

Natures forces Glog



What did I do well?
I Did a successful voice recording and video.
What did I learn?
How to use glogster better.
What is my next learning step?
To Use more info and science.

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

My Maths Knowledge Test

I did well this time and there were a few questions that didn't seem like knowledge.

Monday, April 26, 2010

homfun percentage

I got a 95 % homfun completion rate
I did well because i got 100 snidges for doing it

Sunday, April 25, 2010

My term 2 goal
















I did well on my goal and I think it looks good

Wednesday, April 21, 2010

My first P.I self assessment.

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

Monday, April 19, 2010

P.I comments.

Here are my P.I comments

nathalie holmes: alan really put in a lot of effort and hard work this project must have taken ages nat, kate, kelly and libby


nathalie holmes: WOW this project is really cool.

Caelum Tahiwi: alan put lots of hard work into it


TC: Congratulations, Alan. I think this is tremendous work. You've joined two things you love - native NZ creatures and the Top Trumps game and you've made them into something new and magnificent. I can see how much work you have put into this.


Oliver Burgess-Hight: i like how he did it about native NZ animals


Caelum Tahiwi: We like alans work because he had lots of pictures and he had lots of personality caelum,mike,kale



nathalie holmes: alan we like your cards because they are colorful and they have lots o facts on them.kate, kelly, libby, and nat


nathalie holmes: i like the idea of the two things together

We like the idea of to things put together instead of 2 separate things

Self Reflection on my goal T1

I have achieved it. I have been persistent. I did a hockey training event over the school holidays and can just about ride a rip stick.

Wednesday, March 31, 2010

My Best Writing




















What did I do well?
I did my writing sloping well.
What did I learn?
To Have more detail.
What is my next learning step?
To have less spelling mistakes.

My Maths Strategy

video

My Self Assessment
What did I do Well?
I used strategy's and had filmed.
What did I learn?
I learnt different strategys and how to use them.
What is My next learning step?
My next learning step is to use these strategy's a lot.

Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Sunday, March 28, 2010

My Best Visual Language


My Self Assessment
What Did I Do Well?
I used bold, beautiful and bright colors
What Did I Learn?
The title must relate to the topic
What Is My Next Learning Step?
To sit my letters on the line

Thursday, March 25, 2010

Monday, March 22, 2010

My Snidges

my snidges
My self assessment.
What did i learn?
I learnt that you had to get snidges through homework
What did i do well?
I have jobs which earn money
What is my next learning step?
To find out about businesses

Thursday, March 11, 2010

My Tests





I feel that I did well because It was my first time and the start of the year.

Thursday, February 25, 2010

Thursday, February 18, 2010

My knowledge Test Basic Facts




















My self assessment
what did I do well?
I think I did well with my answering because it was only my second time.
What did I learn?
I learned about factors and what they are.
What would I do better next time?
I would get my factors right and have a go at the primes.

My goal




















my self assessment
what did I do well?
I did well with my bold colors.
what did I learn?
I learnt to have less white
What would I do better next time?
I would have less white.

Monday, February 15, 2010

my throwing averages















my self assessment
what did I do well?
I threw with all my effort.
What did I learn?
a proper throwing technique.
what would I do better next time?
throw further with height

My Visual Language


my self assessment
what did I do well?
my pictures.
what did I learn?
to start linking.
what would I do better next time?
bolder colors.

Thursday, February 11, 2010