Thursday, December 9, 2010
Wednesday, December 8, 2010
Assessment webs
| Date | 22.11.10 | 6/12/10 | |||
| I meet my deadlines | 4 | 3 | |||
| I set challenges and mini comps if things get boring | 3 | 3 | |||
| I organise and keep track of my equipment. | 4 | 4 | |||
| I need nobody to remind me to behave or get back to work. | 4 | 4 | |||
| I keep my eye on the prize | 4 | 4 | |||
| I always have work to carry on with. | 4 | 4 | |||
| Total | 23 | 22 | |||
| Self Reflection / Goals | I need to set more mini challenges or goals and complete everything on time at the end of the day instead of leaving it to the last minute. | I must meet all my deadlines now to complete my T4 goal. I still need to set more |
Quiddage writing
I have done well in Quiddage. Buying soup is quite good (with bread). Getting close to having 40 minutes retirement without business money. Our business the Poolstarz hasn't been the best but still has earned me enough to get 40 minutes. My jobs have included bank manager,accountant, technician, time keeper and QZ times editor.
I earn the most snidges for payslips.
Vis lang Assessment 4
Y6 highlights
Wednesday, December 1, 2010
My Dialogue Writing
"If you want to be brave," Samuel replied.
"What's down there again?"
"A pool of ladybugs!"
"Can I jump yet ? I've been on one toe for half an hour now," Jed said tiredly.
"You could have jumped half an hour ago," laughed Samuel.
"Could have told me that,"
"So you jumping yet?"
"Let’s get it over and done with,"
"Here I go," Jed yells
Athletics Writing
I start to catch up to graceon and Hadley. I can see the finish line more easily. With about two metres to go I catch up to graceon. Yeah! I beat him by about 5 centimetres!
Wednesday, November 10, 2010
Wednesday, November 3, 2010
Speech Video & Assesment
Speeches
Written and Oral Language
We are learning to:
Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately
Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically
Speech Topic:
| Cheating | Self Assessment from video | Speech in front of class | |
| Success Criteria: | |||
| Speech Writing | |||
| My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced | yes | yes | |
| The point I was making was easy to understand | yes | yes | |
| My speech contained research | yes | yes | |
| My speech had voice and was interesting | half | no | |
| My speech was in my words | yes | yes | |
| My big idea comes through strongly | yes | yes | |
| Presentation | |||
| I enunciated my words clearly | half | half | |
| Terminal consonants | no | ||
| Ts and ds in the middles of words | no | ||
| Swallowed my goobies first | yes | ||
| Seperated my words | yes | ||
| My voice was loud enough | yes | yes | |
| I learnt my speech off by heart | half | half | |
| I used expression in my voice | half | no | |
| I used enough volume to be heard by all | yes | yes | |
| I used eye-contact | yes | yes | |
| My speech was not too fast, not too slow | yes | half | |
| My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes | yes | no | |
| My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words | yes | yes | |
| Total: | 13 | 10 1/2 | |
Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14
Self Assessment after Video
Self Assessment after Speech
Sunday, October 17, 2010
Monday, October 11, 2010
Term 3 P.I Comments and Matrix
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
Some interaction
Audience is attentive
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of it for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Novice
Reads the words on the PowerPoint or Glog
Clearly started at the last minute
Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
I think I'm a practitioner.
I've chosen this because I have had some good work. I didn't have enough time to have some audience interaction though. this would have improved my results.
HomeFun Percentage
My Term 3 Goal Assesment
I completed my goal.
What is my next learning step?
to make my goal more colourful.
What did I learn?
to make it more B,B and B
Monday, September 13, 2010
My Best Writing
Sunday, September 12, 2010
Best Vis Lang
Thursday, September 9, 2010
Spelling Test
Sunday, September 5, 2010
Free Writing Cristchurch Earthquake
Buildings Destroyed, Buildings Destroyed,
Injury, Injury,
No Death, No Death,
Flooding, Flooding,
Waste Water, Waste Water,
Millions Of Dollars, Millions Of Dollars,
All Gone, All gone,
Years Of Work, Years Of Work,
All Gone, All Gone,
Time To Fix, Time to fix,
All The Way, All The Way.
Memory's Will Always Stay, Always Stay.
Christchurch.
Ruined Demolished, Ruined Demolished.










