Wednesday, December 1, 2010

My Dialogue Writing

"AAHHH do I have to jump?" asked Jed, horrified.
"If you want to be brave," Samuel replied.
"What's down there again?"
"A pool of ladybugs!"
"Can I jump yet ? I've been on one toe for half an hour now," Jed said tiredly.
"You could have jumped half an hour ago," laughed Samuel.
"Could have told me that,"
"So you jumping yet?"
"Let’s get it over and done with,"
"Here I go," Jed yells

1 comment:

  1. cool writing Alan you did great dialogue writing you need to put some ! in it