My Descriptive writing on autumn

Autumn is cold like a fridge. You have to wrap up to keep warm. leaves fall everywhere. Its like roads are overflowing with leaves. If you clean them all up tomorrow there going to be back. The air is fresh though cleaning the sky's. You see a whirl of red, green, orange, yellow and brown. it looks like a tornado but it's only a tree and its leaves. you look up and the trees are sticks and branches. CRUNCH! The leaves are like 1 cm thick bridge crumbling under 1000kg.

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What did I do well?

I Did the similes well.

What did I learn?

How to make a good description.

What is my next learning step?

To not describe the same things differently.